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Can You Picture That? 
22nd-Aug-2008 10:43 am
Title: Can You Picture That?
Author: cofax (cofax7)
Recipient: musesfool
Rating: PG
Author's Notes: Spoilers through season 3; set early in season 4. 8,500 words.
Summary: Tickle-Me-Chucky was going down.

There were jobs, Dean Winchester realized, struggling against the cord binding his hands behind his back, that were unpleasant.Collapse )
Comments 
14th-Sep-2008 01:28 am (UTC)
This was a hoot and a half to read. <3
15th-Sep-2008 05:54 pm (UTC)
Excellent!
14th-Sep-2008 06:12 am (UTC)
I love this with an absolutely unholy glee! Shades of Smile Time and The Puppet. You got Sam & Dean's voices, their snark, and their physicality letter perfect. But how much do I love Shana? And the fight at the end was *superb*--very cinematic, I could just see and hear it.

It's hard to do a decent casefile *plus* funny, but you pulled it off. Going in my memories.

Edited at 2008-09-14 06:13 am (UTC)
15th-Sep-2008 05:55 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you for the lovely feedback! I'm very glad you liked it.
15th-Sep-2008 10:38 pm (UTC)
Great job with the prompt. :) I really like the casefile you built here, and the backdrop of Dean not being 100 percent and Sam being concerned in a low-key way worked well.

Favorite lines:

just another blip on Google Maps between San Francisco and Los Angeles,

Good description.

and then disappeared, taking his combover and pizza-stained polyester shirt away.

Good details.

and in a moment Sam had his hand up its ass, making it say, "Doood," and flopping its hands around.

LOL! I love this image (and the description).

a riot of yelling kids, who swarmed to the rear door, swirling around the Winchesters like they were rocks in a stream,

Good analogy.

"Did you destroy it?"

Sam flushed. "Dean, it was a library book!"


*snickers* I love how uptight Sam is about some stuff.

"Yeah, whatever. Gimme the keys." Sam put out hand.

"Dream on, Sweetums."

So maybe this job hadn't been so bad, after all.


:) Nicely ended.
17th-Sep-2008 03:57 am (UTC)
Aww, thanks for the lovely comments! Glad you liked it.
16th-Sep-2008 02:56 am (UTC)
This was a terrific case fic and also a touching, wonderful glimpse at a recovering post-Hell Dean and that post-Hell relationship between the boys. This story was so refreshingly fun to me. Angst, of course, but also just a great case story with the brotherly interaction we know and love.

Well done and thank-you :)
17th-Sep-2008 03:57 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
16th-Oct-2008 12:24 am (UTC)
Squeeeeeeeevil puppets!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
16th-Oct-2008 02:07 am (UTC)
Thank you!
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25th-Aug-2009 04:37 am (UTC)
Well, thank you!
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